Thursday, October 25, 2007

Graduation 2011

The dropout rates in Philadelphia are very high. Many kids don’t go to school, many kids also cut school. What makes me think I’m going to reach the top? What makes me think I’m not going to give up? What makes me think I’m going to graduate in 2011? I’m going to graduate in 2011 for three reasons, my family, my knowledge, and my dreams.
In the first place my family is a major part in my life, and my future. My family is number 1 supporters and they help me whenever I need help. My parents urge me to do better, an they want me to succeed. With my parents’ unconditional love and encouragement I’m destined to graduate in2011.
As well as my family, my knowledge is another reason I’m going to graduate in2011. Ever since 1st grade I have been on honor roll. I have the knowledge to succeed, and it would be unlikely for me to fail. I like to study and learn new things. I believe with these skills it will help me reach the top and graduate.
Other than my family, and my knowledge, my dreams are a major part in my future and why I’m going to graduate. I wish to become a lawyer. To become a lawyer I have to graduate high school. I also have to go to college, and law school. I dream to become successful. I dream to graduate in 2011. I know I will reach the top. I know I won’t get sidetracked. I know I will graduate in 2011.

3 comments:

TABiiTHA said...

i really liked how you started asking questions in your introduction..

K'la said...

I really like the introduction it makes sense

shani said...

I love the introduction