Why did i choose Graduation 2011?

Dear reader,

I chose this essay for 2 reasons, it has great voice and details.
It has great voice because it makes you feel like im talikng to you personally. The people who commented on my blog said that they like my opening paragraph.A perfect voice is that you use your own word and it sounds conversational, i used these qualities in my essay and thats why i think its good and i desearve a 4 for voice.
My essay has good details because i used different things in everyday life to suppurt my topic. Perfect details are that its numerous,varied, and effective details.With these qualities in my essay i think i deserve a 4 for details. I hope you enjoy my essay on Graduation 2011 and if you want to T.A.G you can always comment
Sincerly Me

What Is Going On?

Music is meaningless to a song, it's only an attention getter to the words, but when the words have no meaning the whole song is lost. Young girls flaunting their body in tight clothes with nothing on their mind, men are lost in a world that's going no where, money can't even buy you the thoughts that your dreams are made of. We can't even trust the food we eat, or the air we breath. Just where will the road end? There are no generations of life to look forward to, kids are taking care of the parents and parents are taking care of the grandkids. We are always looking for the light at the end of the tunnel and we can't even find the tunnel. The only light we have are in the prayers at night and wake up to the darkness of the daylight of false hope and happiness. These words are not to put you down but to help you look around, there are better ways and better days.