Dear reader,
I chose this essay for 2 reasons, it has great voice and details.
It has great voice because it makes you feel like im talikng to you personally. The people who commented on my blog said that they like my opening paragraph.A perfect voice is that you use your own word and it sounds conversational, i used these qualities in my essay and thats why i think its good and i desearve a 4 for voice.
My essay has good details because i used different things in everyday life to suppurt my topic. Perfect details are that its numerous,varied, and effective details.With these qualities in my essay i think i deserve a 4 for details. I hope you enjoy my essay on Graduation 2011 and if you want to T.A.G you can always comment
Sincerly Me
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